Tuesday 21 January 2020

SLJ week 2 day 1 activity 3 part 3/3



1 comment:

  1. Tēnā Koe Preston,

    Kueni here again. I hope you are having a lovely Wednesday afternoon, what did you do today?

    Wow, this is a very neat letter you have put together for Jacinda Ardern. I can tell that you have such strong feelings about this issue and it is definitely something important to you. You have raised some very valid points about swimming lessons, water safety and the challenge many people face when it comes to money. This is something I don’t usually take too much thought into, but after reading this it definitely has made me think about it so much more.

    You have done a lot of in depth research about water safety and also the statistics around New Zealand when it comes to safety around the water. I commend you for the huge effort and time you have put in to writing about this, I can see your passion in this piece of writing.

    I think it is so great that you are able to have this opinion and are able to share this with your readers today. This is a very well written letter, keep up the hard work Preston!

    Ngā Mihi,
    Kueni

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.